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Post by Daisy on Mar 14, 2006 14:33:21 GMT 10
When I was halfway home I saw a black Mercedes Benz come up behind me. As I slowed down at the lights the car came up next to me. I looked at my clock. It was 9:23 and, according to my calendar, was still Thursday. I frowned, rolled down my windows and looked straight at the black tinted ones next to me. ‘You’re early!’ I yelled hoping that it was the right car. How would you feel if some crazy lady was telling you that you were early? The power windows rolled down, revealing the person inside. Yep, right car. ‘I thought I’d come to check on you before our big debut tomorrow.’ Aaron said smiling. ‘Oh how sweet. You didn’t have to.’ ‘I know but then, here we are.’ ‘No, I mean I didn’t want you to; I’m going to into so much trouble if someone found out.’ ‘What? That you’re dating the enemy?’ ‘No, that I’m helping the enemy instead of arresting him.’ ‘Don’t worry about it. It’s for the greater good.’ He said, sounding like someone from Star Wars or something like that. Yeah, I thought, the greater good or saving your butt. I heard a car beeping behind me and noticed that the lights had changed. When I looked over, Aaron was already zooming at a gazillion kilometres an hour down the road.
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Post by Butterfly Kisses on Mar 14, 2006 15:22:29 GMT 10
That guy reminds me of.... like an ok Paul Slater. (Mediator books 4,5 and 6). But I think this guy is good, and I'm suprised Ally hasn't hurt him..........
She so likes him!!!!!
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Post by Shadow on Mar 14, 2006 18:03:14 GMT 10
STOP CALLING HER ALLY you're confusing me! besides Alicia is her name in the story soz that's what we have to cal her.
cool
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Post by Daisy on Mar 15, 2006 14:32:31 GMT 10
yeah well duh Christina! and if its that good then i just have to buy the rest of the series
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Post by Daisy on Mar 15, 2006 14:37:38 GMT 10
Chapter 5 When I finally got home the first thing I did was sleep but I was rudely awakened at 3:30 (am might I add) by a rapid tapping on my door. I pulled myself out of bed and had to sidestep Sunny who was sleeping happily on the floor. His screech, as I stepped on his tail, woke me up slightly but still…it was 3:30. I opened the door without checking who it was first. It could have been a crazy, escaped serial killer for all I knew but I already knew who it was anyway. ‘What?!’ I said in my most whiny voice as I stood in the doorway, blocking his entry. I don’t think he noticed because he pushed past me and walked swiftly towards my television. ‘No,’ I said, slapping his hand away from my remote, ‘my TV.’ He just bent down and turned it on manually. He was in my apartment at 3:30 and was turning on my television. In my apartment; I just wanted to sleep. And now he was surfing the channels on my Foxtel. I came from a rich family; I could afford these things. But just not a good car, my mum wouldn’t give me that. ‘Aaron, it’s 3:30,’ I looked at the clock, ‘3:40! Can’t you just come back later?’ there was not response. He was still going through the channels. ‘Aaron just go…’ I took a second to breathe in thought, ‘where do you live anyway?’ ‘That’s for me to know and you to find out.’ He gave me a cheeky smile and continued surfing the channels. What was he doing? I came to the conclusion that he was just plain crazy. ‘I am not crazy.’ He said, looking up at me as if he had read my thoughts. ‘Have you seen the news?’ he asked looking back up at me. ‘No, I don’t watch the news at three o’clock. I’m usually sleeping.’ ‘Oh let it go Ally.’ He had the news on. It was showing the case that I was working on now. I was surprised; news travels fast. The reporter talked about Aaron and the bodies and said that Aaron was a key suspect in the murder case.
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Post by Shadow on Mar 15, 2006 17:33:51 GMT 10
hahahaha soz she is gonna hav to see him get da death penalty! HAHAHA
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Post by Butterfly Kisses on Mar 16, 2006 12:23:07 GMT 10
FFX! I don't think his guilty, just a bit annoying. Actually very annoying. Would probably give him brain damage from hitting him over the head in annoyance.
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Post by Shadow on Mar 16, 2006 13:55:48 GMT 10
I know b different Daisy!
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Post by Daisy on Mar 16, 2006 14:17:29 GMT 10
smelly i dont kill off my characters like you do
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Post by Shadow on Mar 16, 2006 15:50:48 GMT 10
well not many ppl do.
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Post by Butterfly Kisses on Mar 16, 2006 16:07:37 GMT 10
JKR kills off her characters, but that's when she doesn't need them anymore. Daisy made us see dead people in the beginning. We see dead people.
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Post by Shadow on Mar 16, 2006 16:49:44 GMT 10
yeah but not main charas
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Post by Daisy on Mar 17, 2006 7:07:40 GMT 10
‘Oh my…’ ‘I know it’s horrible isn’t it. Why would I kill them?’ I was traumatized, ‘Do I really look that fat?’ ‘Yes Ally, you look that fat. Now, back to me. I-’ ‘The whole world does not revolve around you’ He looked up at me, clearly shocked at my words. His blue eyes were burning holes into my green ones and I suddenly felt at if I had thousands of eyes watching me. ‘I do not want to go to gaol for the rest of my life for a crime I did not commit. I do not want to go to gaol for killing Margo Magor, Marcelino Martin and his brother Manuel. I do not want people to think I’m a cold blooded killer because I’m not Alicia. I did not kill those people, Alicia. I didn’t.’ he turned his head back to the television broadcasting the news. It suddenly occurred to me that maybe he was telling the truth. Firstly, never in his life has he called me Alicia; it was always Ally this and Ally that. Secondly he genuinely sounded scared. Bring me one murderer that is scared. I bet you can’t, can you?
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Post by Butterfly Kisses on Mar 17, 2006 15:01:13 GMT 10
Cos all murder's are stoopid..... very stoopid.
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Post by Shadow on Mar 18, 2006 11:24:19 GMT 10
whatever.
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